It's been awhile since I've done a sonnet, not to mention that I haven't done any type of structured piece at all either... This is a petrarchan sonnet, with some breakage of rhyme scheme and the theme of the entire poem basically being "unattainable eternal friendship" instead of "unattainable love" (cause, you know, who cares about love nowadays lol).
1. Is the theme clear and meaningful to the reader?
2. Does the rhyme scheme feel like that it flows with the poem, and not just forced in?
3. What is your interpretation of the piece?
This petrarchan sonnet has also been entered in for challenge [link]
My critique for #theWrittenRevolution: [link]